Hey ho,
ich wollte mal fragen, was Ihr so von meinem ersten selbstgeschriebenen Song "Feeling Free" haltet
Da es mein erster ist, hab ich praktisch keine Ahnung vom "Songwriting", und würde mir deswegen von Euch gerne ein paar Tipps geben lassen
Der Link: https://soundcloud.com/jonas-gehrmann/feeling-free#play
Der Songtext:
Feeling Free
Empty pockets, dirty shoes,
an old guitar thats pretty overused
the world is in hurry, no time for a rest
they're asking th question: “Who's gonna be the best?“
standing in the rain that's falling on my head
in moments like this the time strikes back
I'm not the man I used to be
I have nothing, so I'm feeling free
I'm not the man I used to be
when the people are overlooking me
It's never easy to be on your own
at the end of the day I feel every bone
people are running, but I am not
all I live for is the live I got.
I'm not the man I used to be
I have nothing, so I'm feeling free
I'm not the man I used to be
when the people are overlooking me
I'm not the man I used to be
I have nothing, so I'm feeling free
I'm not the man I used to be
when the people are overlooking me
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