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Rainy day
Sodden hair
Tear dimmed eyes
Maiden fair
Try to survive
Not to snap
Head up high
Chest out child
My feelings buried
Looked in the dungeon
Guarded of monsters
And thousand of gangsters
Stunned with morphine
Wounds concealed
Smile on my face
To deceive them all with my grace

The walls are paper thin
In my Paper fort
With my paper heart
I should break out
But the walls hold back
Only paper thin
I sit there on my paper throne
Crowned with my paper crown
And my Kingdom burn
Burn down

All the poisoned apples were eaten up
The prince rode past
never looked back
My royal robe is covered with mud
Who believe in fairy tales
When you’re the queen of numb
The mirrors shattered
The shards spread on the floor
My blood within
Frame your name
Where have my kingliness been

The walls are paper thin
In my Paper fort
With my paper heart
I should break out
But the walls hold back
Only paper thin
I sit there on my paper throne
Crowned with my paper crown
And my Kingdom burn
Burn down
Burn down

The flames gnaw on my skin
The blaze sears my gown
Till im bare on the ground
And nothing can put the firestorm out
My soldiers kneel dead still down
Dethroned from the pain
Now Im in chains
The estate of your love
To be doomed on your side
For the rest of my life

The walls are paper thin
In my Paper fort
With my paper heart
I should break out
But the walls hold back
Only paper thin
I sit there on my paper throne
Crowned with my paper crown
And my Kingdom burn
Burn down
And after the fire remains my paper crown