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Dream

Strophe1:
everything,
happened earlier
i still feel
deep inside of me
probably
never lose this feeling
but i don't realize
that i still love you

Refrain:
it's a dream
that will never come true
you and me
together forever
what can i do?
i know
i shoud not say this
but i need this certainty
what do you feel
about me? about me now.

Strophe2:
after you were there
only for a short moment
of our lives
everything smells like you
i long back
to that day
you told me you like me
why is it not enough for more?

Refrain

Strophe3:
your kisses were so sweet
i can't forget
you made me laugh
like never before
thoughts spinning through my head
about you
can't deflect them
can't forget them

Refrain


Iwo soll noch ne Bridge rein aber ich komm da iwie net weiter :P