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unmittelbar nach "come real" entstanden, streckenweise ähnelt er "diggin' deep" - ist ja auch die gleiche Attitüde. Intro (= interlude = outro) wirkt notdürftig "angedockt", zumal der Einsatz nicht ganz stimmt. Hab's so gelassen - es war der Keim für den Song und schon lange vor dem Rest da. Meine Performance wie immer (braucht viel Nachsicht), es geht mir um Idee, Struktur, und natürlich vor allem auch den Text. Mit den Soloparts bin ich selbst ganz zufrieden, und mit dem satten Sound.
Meine Sachen sind alle einfach zu spielen, vielleicht findet sich ja einmal eine Band ...
Nu aber:
http://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=11114820
Der Text, falls sich jemand das Anhören ersparen möchte:
I need to spill blood
rub your face in the mud
won't give a shit 'bout your pleading
dance with glee while your bleeding
what do you find in him that I could not offer
it sure ain't the looks of this paltry guy
tell me which riches has he got in his coffer
give me just one reason that I can buy
I need to spill blood
rub your face in the mud
won't give a shit 'bout your pleading
dance with glee while your bleeding
comparing his virtues to my vices
worshipping him you trample on me
what once was whole you cut into slices
don't be too sure that I'm letting you free
you dump me like old stuff on a junkyard
you treat me like some piece of shit
for you love is a thing you can take or discard
you've had your fun now you're sayin' "that's it"
I need to spill blood
rub your face in the mud
won't give a shit 'bout your pleading
dance with glee while your bleeding
girl you hurt me and you drive me bonkers
bright perspectives you've turned into black
you're doing me wrong, you're offending my honour
what you're doing to me I will pay back
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