Wie findet ihr den Text? Soll in die Richtung Rapcore/ Nu Metal gehen, heisst: gerappte Strophen, gesungener Refrain.

Strophe 1

lying in the dark awake
all my hope just faded
lying in the dark awake
all illusions, they stagnated

i tried to fight my bringers of sadness
but in the night I am defenseless
by day I can hide from reality
but in the night it catches me
blows me away

all my smiles fade away
I can´t touch them, they won´t stay
all my dreams fade away
I can not touch what they preyed

ain´t I the one who´s guilty
ain´t I the one who let it happen
am I the casualty
or am I the delinquent

I am alone again
I can´t accept
I am alone again
I´ve to accept

Refrain

lying in the dark awake
all my hope just faded
lying in this hell again
where all illusions stagnated

Strophe 2

and everytime I try to drown myself in fantasies
I can feel the self-esteem running out of me
a loss that destroys hope again
a loss taking me clother to the end
and I tried to find the happiness
tried to fight the sadness
but the only result is, that I got deeper in this shit

I´ve had my attacks
but they were all fought back
I´m nothing but a loser

yes, I´m the one who´s guilty
I guess I´m the one who let it happen
I´m not the casualty
I´m just a delinquent

I am alone again
I can´t accept
I am alone again
I must accept

Bridge

all my smiles have faded away, I can´t touch them it´s too late
all my dreams have faded away, I can not touch what I´ve preyed

in the dark everything´s so clear
the world does not want me here
in the dark everything´s so clear
I don´t belong to here

and now I force myself to sleep
to calm myself in soften dreams
anticipating a day full of lies
I don´t have the grit to look the truth in the eyes
one more time I try to hide
in my dreams I finally find
hope hope hope hope hope

but then I wake up again
I know this is the end
I wake up again
this is the end


Danke schonmal