von sonata arctica und meinem leben inspiriert hab ich jetz mal ein eigenes lied geschrieben, ich bitte einfach nur um kontruktive kritik
father,..you have forsaken me,
without a sign where you will be,
the only things you left were arrears,
but for you, i wont drop any tears
this had been many years ago,
and it seems that we dont know,
the other one,
are we still father and son?
mother,..the problem you never talked about
the feelings that you hide
forced you to try suicide..
..again and again..
you wanted leave your childrens alone
didnt you want see them grown?
your last try is just a year ago,
and it seems that you dont know
how you should handle your life
so you slice wounds in my heart like a knife
you married a man that i dont like
he is acting like a child
just a loser with an inferiority complex
he treats us bad,
made me often so sad
how could such a fool be your honey?
or did you just marry him 'cause his money?
this had been many years ago,
and it seems that he dont know,
the feelings that i hided all this years
just dissembled them in fears
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