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This is brilliant, I have no suggestions.
At most you could arrange the tune a bit better, but the fundamental components of the tune are done.
J. Garcia

This is a killer little song! Great energy and a simple yet powerful lyric.
I personally love the raw garage band energy. If you can capture that in a professional demo you would have a sweet gem of a song.
Cool vocal and all around great work!
Gary

Sometimes simple is best and you have proven it with this tune. I love the lyric and melody.
Dave

Great guitar riff and hooky chorus.
Would be interesting to hear it as a full-on in-your face production track.
but even as is I'm sold on the song as a song!
Paul

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Neat intro and cool main guitar tone, liked the solo and the chorus was catchy.
I felt it lacked the drive in the arrangement for a rock song, which is where I think you wanted it to go,...

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Ich bin nicht der, der den Song aufführt oder richtig ausproduziert - über eine Demo komme ich nicht hinaus. Vielleicht aber Du/Ihr?

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Bernd